Air travel is one of the greatest inventions of humans. Although, it is a very good source of transportation, certain people opine that it should be blocked as it causes environmental pollution as well as exploit the earth's fuel resources. This essay will discuss why this system of travelling should not be banned despite of its negative effects on environment and ecosystem.
Many individuals believe that flying-transport should be restricted because the gases like carbon, nitrogen et cetera, released by the planes after burning of fossil fuels like petroleum, CNG, et cetera, are the major factor contributing to the air pollution. The National Geographic Society, for instance, stated that most of the components of pollutants come from the combustion of fuels from the aero planes. In addition, these non-renewable fossil fuels are extracted from the cores of earth and there excessive usage in air travel may cause trouble to other transport systems due to its sufficient availability. Thus, this means should be banned in order to save our earth.
However, I believe that this action needs not to be taken into consideration because it is the only means through which people are able to travel overseas. Moreover, it acts as a time-saver for the people in emergency. For example, if someone needs to see a doctor sitting far away from their region, they may take a flight in order to reach the specialist instantly in case of any emergency. In addition, air cargo is the best way to transport the goods to different countries. That is why; restriction of air-travel should not be taken as granted.
In conclusion, this essay argued why air transportation should not be banned despite of its unfavorable impacts on environment as well as ecosystem. In my opinion, the airplanes should be assembled in such a way that they consume less amount of fuel while flying.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, moreover, so, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1566.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05161290323 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94666428102 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561290322581 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.1604528691 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.857142857 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1428571429 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.71428571429 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106902086059 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.042219883447 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0327704361393 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0717468127185 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0283344936639 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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