Some say you should marry for love; others say that in an uncertain world its wiser to marry for money.
Discuss both point of views and give your opinion.
In recent years, debate over marriage has been attracting several beliefs and opinions. Though, it is somewhat relevant to get married, some people believe that togetherness and love is important for a healthy matrimony, while others argue that it is prudent to choose money over love. This essay will explore both ideas but will portray why former is the wisest choice.
To start off, having a healthy and stable financial status is one of the most important factors for a healthy married life. Moolah is the main driving force for any couple to lead a comfortable lifestyle. Moreover, when a family grows, it is the wealth that helps you to cope up with extraneous expenses. For example, a wealthy couple can enjoy romantic & expensive dinners, occasional holidays etc. To illustrate this further, having accumulated wealth can also help in tackling hefty hospital bills during and post pregnancy, baby clothes & food, caretaker bills, kids school fees and many more for the new family member. Furthermore, a husband and wife can enjoy all the material benefits together to lead a happy married life.
On the other hand, if the relationship between a husband and wife is based on tangible assets like money then such bonds are more superficial and are not long lasting. For a marriage to grow into an intimate and transcendental relationship, love is extremely necessary. Imagine a husband, after a long and tiring day, coming back home to a loving wife who has prepared a simple yet special candle light meal is something priceless, which money cannot buy. Such things make the marriage more stronger and unshakable. Even when the marriage is going through ups and downs, it will be the bond or love that will help the marriage to survive the hurdles. Moreover, a loving husband and wife also have a sense of mutual respect for each other which is predominantly absent in relationships that are based on transactions or give & take. For instance, my parents have seen worst days of their lives together, and, it was not money/wealth that kept their marriage intact. It was the beautiful memories they cherished together kept them hanging on.
To conclude, although in today's world, money is extremely relevant for the smooth functioning of any marriage, but, love has greater value among all factors. Hence, without a shadow of doubt, love should be the prime basis for any marriage.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 487, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'stronger' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: stronger
...nnot buy. Such things make the marriage more stronger and unshakable. Even when the marriage ...
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Line 5, column 863, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'seen the worst'.
Suggestion: seen the worst
...e & take. For instance, my parents have seen worst days of their lives together, and, it w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, then, while, for example, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1995.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 398.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01256281407 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46653527281 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63715681246 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 242.0 176.041082164 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608040201005 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 619.2 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.3162679401 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.0 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9473684211 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57894736842 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 8.67935871743 207% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222467977282 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.061346263279 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0464870255261 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12848464133 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0148358113623 0.056905535591 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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