Undoubtedly, the usage of modern technologies have revolutionized the agriculture farming, but still is partially unsuccessful to produce adequate amount of food. However, these intimidating obstacles can be overcome by using effective farm management policies.
To begin with, population growth ceases economic growth and infrastructure development. Moreover, lack of food causes due to rise in population or sudden growth in population rate.Unsatisfactory policies by a country administrator also results in food drought. Even though many phenomenal technologies has been introduced that helps in ploughing, harvesting and threshing, it is not suitable for the small cultivators due to its high price. So, they think of doing ordinary farming due to lack of necessary equipments. For example, in south asian territories, many farmers grow crops for their own family only but not for market.
On the other hand, mandatory support from government could be essential to control food deficiency. Firstly, state administration should assure that local backs should provide loans in a easy way to the farmers so that they can buy the agricultural equipments of their needs. Secondly, accurate weather forecast and informative farm training should be provided in order to reduce the failing of crops. For example, in east asia, due to wrong weather lots of crops were damaged.
Overall, even though there are many causes for scarcity of food, it can be effectively controlled if the government support towards agricultural industry becomes stronger.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 181, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Unsatisfactory
...ion or sudden growth in population rate.Unsatisfactory policies by a country administrator als...
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Line 5, column 183, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a easy way" with adverb for "easy"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...e that local backs should provide loans in a easy way to the farmers so that they can buy the...
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Line 5, column 186, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...hat local backs should provide loans in a easy way to the farmers so that they ca...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, for example, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1324.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 234.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.65811965812 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19495822413 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.6999160369 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.333333333 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3333333333 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0687865423125 0.244688304435 28% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0251727230398 0.084324248473 30% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0241727435099 0.0667982634062 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.050762855665 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0222967583463 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.55 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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