Many folks throughout the global are facing a problem of starvation despite of the advances occured in agriculture sector. This essay will argue two causes as well as provide appropriate solutions of the problem.
The major causes of starvation in the world are due to dramatic population growth and civil war. The population of the world is rapidly increasing day to day as a consequence, the demand of food is sky-rocketing. Novice advanced technology are implemented although the quantity of food is not enough to accomplish the demand of hunger. In addition, wastage of food product results in worth condition for famish people. For instance, a survey reveals that due to excessive fooding, American are suffering from obesity whereas Somalia and Vietnam are facing of food scarcity. Moreover, civil war also leads towards crisis of food which is result of destruction of infastructure along with agriculture field.
It is a common believe, in every problem it carries redimate solution. Firstly, it is crucial to know the importance of food and learn not to misuse them. Secondly, the growth rate of population should be equilibrium in condition, always produced more than demand. Finally, countries which are badly injured by civil war, must be supported by developed countries. For example, powerful country provide shelter and fooding for country like Bhutan, whose economic condition was not good during civil war.
In conclusion, the number of hunger bloomed around the world, inspite of advances made in agriculture sector. The problem of starvation should be eradicated by identifying the actual reason behind the scarcity of food.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, whereas, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1386.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31034482759 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8375210944 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593869731801 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.1142488003 49.4020404114 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 92.4 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.8 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119351763884 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0415501517095 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0436793603352 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0930868052628 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0588027489843 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.68 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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