Stores should sell local food products and not the imported food products. Do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, consumers are more likely to purchase imported food products from foreign countries. While there are various reasons for the increase of this tread and some precautions need to be taken to control the over consumption of ship in items. In my opinion, I completely agree that supermarkets must bring up local foods rather than opting from other countries.
With the drastic increase in international trade and marketing many tend to purchase different kinds of foods products being shipped from overseas. Besides, there are wide varieties of consumer goods being introduced day by day which is attracting public. On a serious note, to prevent the fruits and vegetables without spoiling while transport, toxic preservatives are sprayed; besides, degrading individual health.
Accordingly, in this hectic schedule everyone is opting to eat instant food. Some foods which are packed with preservatives for instant cooking such as, pasta and noodles. These kinds of eatables are hazardous to human’s apatite. Gradually, this type of food damages our immune system and there after effects whole body parts.
On the other hand, farmers are the most seriously cursed people by these imported goods; because they cannot compete with the low price of shipped goods. Locally grown products like whole grains, vegetables, fruits are healthy to environment as well as to every human. Our local food is not being encouraged by stores because they get imported products at low price and even they can sell them for high price and place offers to attract public.
In conclusion, the main reason for choosing imported foods is because they produce wide varieties of food products and maintain quality. Finally, in my opinion the government should raise tax on importation by which supermarkets will minimize their interest in importing vivid variety of goods. This will directly help local farmers in selling their food products which were naturally grown and helps in saving public health.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 294, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: thereafter
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, besides, finally, if, so, well, while, as to, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1681.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35350318471 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61336151422 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595541401274 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.9716060552 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.0625 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.625 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.9375 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305401429886 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.09498166734 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0751421418683 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163213158699 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0705920836671 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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