A successful person is one who earns a lot of money. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Many people believe that collecting lots of money is a main factor of being a successful individual. however, I completely disagree with this belief, as I wholeheartedly think that success is a fruit of combination of several factors as well as there are a plethora of examples for some successful people who were very poor but left a conspicuous great mark on worldwide communities. This essay aims to explore such a debatable issue in further detail and before coming to a conclusion.
To begin with, there is no doubt that money is playing a crucial role in making the success. For example, money give the power and leverage for their holders to meet many impossible thinks such as nominating to very high governmental position. Donald Trump the president of the USA as an example, is a well-known businessman, he has no real experience in the American political field. However, by his financial ability, he managed to done very impressive campaigns that cost chunk of money to become the president of the strongest nation. On the flip side, others might exploit money illegally by receiving and providing bribes to do illegal activities which might affect the economy of their countries. Those people in fact are extremely dangerous in their communities as they only care about their personal wins even if it came from unlwaful routes and impact on other people. Therefore, there is an obvious gap between the rich and the poor people in some nations where the corruption very high.
In contrast, regular people can still be prosperous. As the success will never be managed by merely money that people gain. individuals indeed might be successful in different fields such as education, healthcare, engineering and so on. For instance, the pupils who spent most of their times studying very hard and achieving high scores afterwards, are deserving to be called as successful individuals. Moreover, employees who have ambitious and passions with integrity in their works which make them to fulfill their companies goals are being merit to called successful workers. Scientists for example who spent huge effort to produce some medications in order to overcome a plethora of diseases should also be called as successful members.
To sum up, earning money does not always mean the success, might these money coming from corruption. however, people can be successful without money in plenty of different areas such like education, healthcare and many other fields.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in contrast, in fact, no doubt, such as, as well as, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2072.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 403.0 315.596192385 128% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14143920596 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48049772903 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78261704061 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 176.041082164 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578163771712 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 647.1 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.0530890994 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.111111111 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3888888889 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.22222222222 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188552459605 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.060473705251 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.048037490862 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123767836527 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0286857880751 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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