Television dominates the free-time for too many people. It can make people lazy and prevent them from socialising with others. Do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, a lot of people spend their spare time sitting in front of the television watching from a wide range of different programs in offers. This development can lead to people being work-shy and also deter them from interacting with other people. In my opinion, I completely agree that spending so much time in front of TV affects the ability of people to work and socialise.
Sitting on a single position for hours makes people not to have the desire to do other things. In other words, individuals who spend hours watching different television programs hardly have the desire to cook their own food but instead order for fast food which most of the time are unhealthy. In addition, it can result to having more and more obese people in our society. A recent study in UK concluded that seventy percent of obese people in Manchester spend many hours watching different TV programs. Also, people do not have time to read books to enrich and broaden their knowledge.
Television watching encourage people to live in isolation. Individuals who spend so much time in their living room watching TV programs hardly have time to meet friends and even make new once. This can often lead to health problems such as depression and so on. Since they are always alone, they do not have time to participate in community activities, hence having no opportunity to socialise with others.
In conclusion, People occupy themselves on their spare time by watching television programs. This makes a lot of people indolent and hence deterring them from meeting others. In my opinion, I totally agree that spending so much time in front television makes individuals work-shy and unsocial.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1401.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96808510638 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59781967601 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.489361702128 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.5480269807 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.4 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.13333333333 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286277755802 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107608405611 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0447774841095 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195223562849 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.036852006086 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.