The tendency of news reports in the media to focus more on problems and emergencies rather than on positive developments is harm to the individuals and the society as a whole. To what extent do you agree or disagree
there is a current distressing situation that the trend of news reports in the media to focus more on problems and emergencies instead of increase benefits is harm to the personal and the society. personally. I agree with this opinion for a number of reasons.
On the one hand, some people think that news reports focus on problems and emergencies will brings them drawbacks since the following reasons. Firstly, these reports will make citizents do not believe their life anymore by crimes or accidents which make people lose the sense of security. To explain, when they see any news in the media about robbers, killing... therefore, they just stay at their home and do not talk with other people because they are afraid to be taken advantage or harming them. As a result, they become careful over and doubt together each other, so it is difficult to build relationship with each other in their life. Secondly, it encourage journalists who create some news do not true in life and bad stories. because, some journalists believe that if they make their news become thrillling, people will notice their news which is they create for people feel scare and they will have more incomes for them.
On the other hand, beside there are some opposite trends effects. they think these reports will help people more cautious in their life, they can avoid some bad actions and from that they will have some ways to protect themselves. However, I think this is just suitabe for some people who aware of social issues and there are powers such as goverment who can find best solutions to solving problemsand can protect the local . For instance, when goverment see some news such as robber on media which is will help goverment know more thier action, it then they will have some ways easy to keep them. But, in my opinion it do not suit with citizents, because if citizents action the same goverment, the bad person will harmful them since citizents there are not power so bad person do not scare.
To conclude, owing to these reasons it seems to me that I think this bad influence rather than benefits for people because it make people afraid in their lives and must live in a caution life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, for instance, i think, such as, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 24.0651302605 191% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1813.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 381.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75853018373 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30432076576 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.469816272966 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 557.1 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.5295198173 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.866666667 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144343872679 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0629807167071 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.064323532404 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11541297473 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0769599503366 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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