There are serious concerns about the sale and production of genetically modified food. Yet this is necessary if we are to meet the demands of an increasing world population.
Give your opinions on this.
It is widely believed that people do not welcome genetically modified food generally, but in the other side world population is increasing rapidly and this is a very big problem with food resources. I am convinced that we can produce food more efficiently in the future to accomplish the demands.
Firstly, people claimed that genetically modified food is not natural and this is a deviation from traditional production. The lack of trust is the major problem for those who are convinced that this is the future. Masses do not approach well any scientific experiment in the genetic field.
I believe there is no evidence to support that genetically modified food is healthy as produced normally produced with out modification. On the other hand, scientists have given good reasons that this is secure and has not bad derivation from traditional standards.
Despite general contradicting factors that are involved in this issue, population is increasing in large scale and need for food too. Fast production in the same amount area is the solution for this case. It certainly true that land planted is decreasing because of expanded city areas and we need to think what might happen in near future.
In conclusion, GM food may minimize the problem and provide the requirements for standard production, but the general opinion matters and it is still possible to maximize effectively planted land.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 115, Rule ID: WITH_OUT[1]
Message: This word is usually written together. Did you mean 'without'?
Suggestion: without
...s healthy as produced normally produced with out modification. On the other hand, scient...
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Line 4, column 218, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'trues'?
Suggestion: trues
...he solution for this case. It certainly true that land planted is decreasing because...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, so, still, well, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1174.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 228.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14912280702 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84656894442 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592105263158 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 371.7 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.6030980376 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.727272727 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7272727273 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.18181818182 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259216722301 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0939137196263 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0566428529623 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134979905772 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0547516885134 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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