There is certainly a difference in thoughts, ideas and actions between children, their parents and grandparents. Why do these differences exist? Does it cause problems in your community, in your opinion?
generation means 12 years where the loop hole appears in culture, food, life style, time management ability according to schedule and decision making power as per the current situation. generation gap leads to numerous mind sets, thinking process or regular activities among family. we often become the witness of the huge understanding difference where grandparents thinking don't match with the young people. this essay will define the possible causes of these unmatched ideas and describe the associate difficulties happening in society through my strong opinion.
it is obvious that people are always trying to follow the most recent trends in order to run with the flow. Conception about every aspects of life builds with these ongoing trends. Now problems lies here. people should move on to mix up with the upcoming movement. But we often forgot to upgrade ourselves. So, instead of rebuild individuals thinking or mentality we try to dominate those who are younger than us. Teenagers will never concentrate on the previously created viewpoints rather than they lose their temperament while finding facts behind it. For example, if we dig into last 20 years back, we will get in touch with countless outdated standpoints which was mostly inclines towards women. women were not allowed to step outside as there were a gender specific rules. As per the old age perspective, women are supposed to work within house where as men were liable to work outside work. In short, this is how issues are gradually creating and existing in today's locality.
Let's talk about the vital misunderstanding in your community. Two main problems are growing due to such enormous gap ie. Gender-bias and adjustment. In my opinion, both of these reasons can become an unstoppable chaos among the own family members.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, while, for example, in short, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1535.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25684931507 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64320339875 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.719178082192 0.561755894193 128% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.2073529189 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.7894736842 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3684210526 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.94736842105 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103382230503 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0273674128616 0.084324248473 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0367589973391 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0747234951051 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0353133103071 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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