Traffic jams, rolling trains, and roaring airplanes has become a constant in our daily life. If there is no doubt that the technological conquests of the last decades have dramatically improved our living conditions, drawbacks have also to be taken into account. Beside air pollution and garbage, one of the most annoying consequences of living in the cities is noise. The aim of this issue is to investigate the reasons of this problem and to propose solution to tackle it.
Accordingly to several studies, the amount of noise in our cities has increased over the past years reaching sometimes harmful levels for our health. The reasons behind this issue are multiple and basically root in traffic congestion. Less tangibly but not less importantly, airplanes contribute to sharpen the problem, though in a way that is not comparable with the noise caused by car usage. Especially for people living directly near busy streets, the noise levels they are exposed to can be extremely hard to tolerate. The side effects ensuing acoustic pollution range from lapses in concentration to lack of sleep. If some of those negative aspects have little or no impact on our performance and health, others can conversely cause severe diseases. The consequences of sleep deprivation, for instance, should not be underestimated since they are scientifically proved to be linked to diabetes and cardiovascular problems. Yet, there is good news.
Recent years have witnessed an increased awareness about environmental issues. Since then authorities have made of taking actions to detonate an ecologic disaster a priority. Governments are allocating resources to fund alternative energy sources to reduce not only the amount of carbon dioxide emissions but also the level of acoustic pollution. Furthermore, low-tech solutions like double glazing have turned out to be very effective against noises coming form outside. Another weapon to fight acoustic pollution is certainly public transport, perhaps the foremost valid solution to curb all the negative effects of traffic congestion.
In conclusion, noise is a fixed component of modernity. It is the price we have to pay to use cars, trains, and airplanes. Although it is almost impossible to remove it completely, it is also true that we can live with thanks to uncountable solutions ranging from electric cars to thick windows.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, conversely, furthermore, if, so, then, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1999.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 376.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3164893617 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93028506525 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 176.041082164 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609042553191 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 637.2 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9986918406 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.95 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238846110846 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0589485796732 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0444266335118 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126028974354 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0554681340723 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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