There is a lot of pressure on young people today to succeed academically. As a result, some people believe that non-academic subjects, such as physical education and cookery, should be removed from the school syllabus so that children can concentrate on academic work.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadys, students are being pressured to achieve greater heights on their education journey. one school of thought opines that, it is best to eliminate extra curricular activities such as cooking and sports from the syllabus, in order for the youngsters to focus on scoring better marks on their exams. After a numerous serious analysis, I do not believe that the above thought is more rational. this essay will discuss the significance of including activities apart from the student curriculum.
Primarily, Yougsters tend to spend most of the time at school and as soon as they are back home they start doing their assignments and study english, maths, science and other subjects in order to, successfully get into top ranked universities. Hence, this routine will develop stress automatically when people around keep forcing them to concentrate on scoring well on exams. For example, when I was preparing for my university entrance exam, I was at the library even during my holidays and it was extremely stressful for me which in the end affected my health badly.
Secondly, youngsters must understand that academics are not the only way of being successfull in life and also, not everyone can accomplish on academics. Moreover, there are students who might have the talent or interest in extra curricular activities such as painting, learning music instruments or badminton. For instance, one of my classmates was not good at his education whereas he excelled in sports. he was selected to represent India in an International swimming competition. Therefore, we must understand that non-academic activities should also be welcomed by everyone.
In conclusion, it is understandble that the academic part is essential for young generations but that does not mean that other activities should not be included in the curriculum as it helps youngster on health as well as to identity their passion.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, whereas, apart from, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1625.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32786885246 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94794760047 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622950819672 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.4365331139 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.0 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4615384615 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.3076923077 7.06120827912 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166170273892 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0555768835068 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0437413786651 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0946418780698 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0285977282249 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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