These days, in many countries, fewer and fewer people want to become teachers, particularly in secondary schools. What are the reasons for this, and how could the problem be solved?
<p style="margin-bottom: 0px; font-stretch: normal; font-size: 12px; line-height: normal; font-family: "PT Sans"; color: rgb(34, 34, 34);"><span style="font-kerning: none">Teaching profession, especially for the secondary students, nowadays has become less popular than ever before due to a plethora of reasons such as lowering in the financial benefits, and the colossal time and effort to deal with various pupils’ attitude in order to deliver an optimal result. This essay aims to explore the challenges that face such an occupation as well as the solutions which might mitigate this problem. </span></p>
<p style="margin-bottom: 0px; font-stretch: normal; font-size: 12px; line-height: normal; font-family: "PT Sans"; color: rgb(34, 34, 34); min-height: 15px;">To begin with, there is no doubt that the salary is very important factor for people to live normally. However, there is an conspicuous variation between most of professions and teaching, as it ranked on the lower wages ladder. Syrian teacher for example earn very low payment compared to other professions such as engineers, pharmacists and doctors. Therefore, most of them force to work extra work hours in different field such as waiters and taxi driver to cope up with high cost of living there. The second reason being the poor respected by their students. It’s irrefutable that most of pupils particularly in the secondary schools are still immature and adolescents. Thus, their attitude might be very rode against their tutors. As a result, teachers might be under a massive stress which might affect their health. Finally, teachers might expend most of their personal and leisure time correcting their students exams and assignments. <br><span style="font-kerning: none"></span></p>
<p style="margin-bottom: 0px; font-stretch: normal; font-size: 12px; line-height: normal; font-family: "PT Sans"; color: rgb(34, 34, 34); min-height: 15px;">On the flip side, plenty of solutions might overcome the obvious reluctance of working in such profession. First of all, teachers’s salaries must be amended to match with the real life expenses. Second of all, schools should apply strict measures against impolite students. Such pivotal action might help them to revised their disciplines and makes them respectful and productive in the future. Finally, in terms of delivering a high education quality, schools should indeed maintain the life work balance for their tutors. <br><span style="font-kerning: none"></span></p>
<p style="margin-bottom: 0px; font-stretch: normal; font-size: 12px; line-height: normal; font-family: "PT Sans"; color: rgb(34, 34, 34); min-height: 15px;">To sum up, teaching profession is very significant profession. Nevertheless, many people aviod it because of the poor financial benefits as well as it needs huge effort which sometime impact on people life. Yet, there are some solutions might help in mitigate this issue. <br><span style="font-kerning: none"></span></p>
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, if, nevertheless, second, so, still, therefore, thus, well, for example, no doubt, such as, as a result, as well as, first of all, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2727.0 1615.20841683 169% => OK
No of words: 425.0 315.596192385 135% => OK
Chars per words: 6.41647058824 5.12529762239 125% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54043259262 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.55961753996 2.80592935109 162% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 176.041082164 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538823529412 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 711.9 506.74238477 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 144.39198379 49.4020404114 292% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 160.411764706 106.682146367 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5882352941 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0587168580683 0.244688304435 24% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.029502792468 0.084324248473 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0261619168218 0.0667982634062 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0462165703067 0.151304729494 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0198794355442 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.3 13.0946893788 163% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 20.25 12.4159519038 163% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 119.0 78.4519038076 152% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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