These days many families move abroad for work. Some people believe that this benefits the children in these families. Others believe that it makes their lives more difficult. Discuss both views and give your own opinion
Nowadays, many employees are sponsored to work in the foreign countries, and married couples prefer taking their dependents along with them. Moving to a new country can lead to both pros and cons in the life of their children. Through the course of this essay, I would like to present my viewpoint based on all the points and calculations by considering both the sides of the argument.
To begin with, youths might find it really exciting, especially moving from a developing country to a developed one. They might be exhilarated to see huge malls, creative aquariums, beautiful parks and buildings with modern amenities, which in return could empower their imagination. Moreover, their linguistic and communication skills may highly benefit from talking to numerous new people. One thing that needs special mentioning is that, the teenagers might learn a host of juvenile rights from a developed country, which they would have rarely learned in their own developing countries.
However, moving abroad may cause severe problems to them who might have to transfer their school and college to pursue their studies. The might have to cop up with the lessons as per the new Institute. The study standards may vary drastically depending on the location, like there can be big difference between learning practices of schools in the United States compared with India. Such students might need counseling for sometime. In such a situation, if the parents cannot give ample time to kids due to work pressure, then it would exacerbate their mental condition.
To conclude, moving to a new nation can be a big decision. The Guardians must consider all the cases, which can create a great impact on the members commuting together. My opinion is that, there are undeniable benefits to the children, but there can be severe disadvantages, which cannot be ignored. Hence, to maintain a proper balance and avoid any regrets in life, parent must consider all the aspects.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, may, moreover, really, so, then, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 23.0 7.85571142285 293% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1644.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1214953271 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68764855242 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613707165109 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5819503361 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.75 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0625 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4375 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120547339191 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.040527867446 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0338596900407 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0754136003572 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0327652576771 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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