These days many families move abroad for work. Some people believe that this benefits the children in these families. Others believe that it makes their lives more difficult.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion
Nowadays numerous families immigrate to foreign location for job. A significant number of individuals consider that this step is profitable for their children. Whiles others argue that it has adverse effects on their family. This essay will discuss both the views followed by an opinion.
It is irrefutable that children moving to advance countries have more benefits, as the develop countries have better education system and other opportunities to explore. For instance, the education in the western countries are way more advanced in terms of quality, professionalism and chance to learn many things which children cannot learn in their underdeveloped home country. Thus, it helps the children to become competent and strong enough to participate in the world level competitions.
However, language becomes a problem sometimes for the person and his family while living in a foreign land. Most countries in the world have their own language and it is a necessary tool for any individual in daily life to communicate, therefore someone travelling from English country to Arabic region finds hard in communication and it impacts their daily life in travelling, purchase and in many other aspects. For example English person does not know Arabic language, thus they finds difficulties in daily routine while living in Arabic countries such as Kuwait.
In conclusion, although, language act as a barrier in the living style of a family while residing in foreign land, however, I believe that the benefits of living in foreign country are more beneficial to have bright future as well as the development of children. That the reason, most of the individuals these days prefer to immigrate to developed nations.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...dvance countries have more benefits, as the develop countries have better education system ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...cipate in the world level competitions. However, language becomes a problem some...
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Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'travels'.
Suggestion: travels
... life to communicate, therefore someone travelling from English country to Arabic region f...
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Line 5, column 483, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'find'
Suggestion: find
...oes not know Arabic language, thus they finds difficulties in daily routine while liv...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ing in Arabic countries such as Kuwait. In conclusion, although, language act as...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1448.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32352941176 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86322245382 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5625 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.2224420461 49.4020404114 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.666666667 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259664533079 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0909567788622 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0406532821609 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154100309062 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0483688682418 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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