Nowadays, people tend to shift abroad in order to hunt for better job opportunities or quality education. People consider foreign land as a utopia, however, that is not completely true. Migration from one country to another has its own advantages and disadvantages and in this essay, I would shed some light on them.
Talking about the advantages of migration, the primary reason for this is Global exposure. When people go and live in another country, they get exposed to a different culture and environment. Which certainly helps them in well-rounded growth. Secondly, the developed countries have better job opportunities and law-in order and this is the topmost reason for people of under-developed countries to move abroad.
On the other hand of the argument, the high cost of living and language barrier are the problems faced by the people in a foreign land. Other issues are homesickness and performance pressure. Many students spend millions of money on education in developed countries, however, due to the performance pressure and cultural differences, return back to their home country.
In conclusion, the disadvantages outweigh the advantages of people migrating from one country to another. In my opinion, it takes a plethora of efforts to get established in a foreign land and if we put the same amount of work in our country, we can definitely build a good career in our native land.
- Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society Others however believe that school is the place to learn this Discuss both views and give your opinion 78
- These days more and more people are going to other countries for significant periods of time either to find a job or to study There are clearly many benefits to doing this but people who live abroad can also face some difficulties Discuss the advantag 56
- These days more and more people are going to other countries for significant periods of time either to find a job or to study There are clearly many benefits to doing this but people who live abroad can also face some difficulties Discuss the advantag 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, second, secondly, so, well, in conclusion, talking about, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1181.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 229.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15720524017 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99306674536 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606986899563 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 371.7 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.214439572 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.4166666667 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0833333333 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.58333333333 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237517188606 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0819775593496 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0517447209559 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136063209108 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0510373084919 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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