These days people are leaving their country to study or for jobs for a significant period of time. What are the positive and negative points of this ?
The increased trend in current world scenario is to travel abroad either for a study or for a work. migration has increased since a decades of years as everyone's commitments are playing major role. It does have equal upside and downside to deal with. Many believes only on its positive side and suffering on later part of their decision.
To begin with its pros, there are people who are very much keen to explore themselves by travelling around the world for any of these reasons such as study, business, work and much more which gives them benefit of obtaining experience from different nationalities. Another thing is that the changes in their lifestyle. Migrants becoming more broad-minded than living in their own country, For instance, the level of thinking, dressing, approach to others, making use of advanced resources and devices etc. Most importantly, the change over they get in their financial status after successful employment is the major focus of current economy situation. They would get settled financially better than their own place.
While there are above mentioned desirable outcomes, many negatives which impact both nation and personal due to the increase in migration. First of all, talented young generation eliminates to give their knowledge to their own country. This is terribly impacting economy of our nation as we desperately need many developments in almost all divisions. There are plenty of resources available here but to make use of them correctly to enhance their lifestyle, work, study are not considered so far.
Furthermore, The huge amount they spend to go to abroad countries is biggest challenge comparatively. Middle class families who just wanted to send their children to study abroad or to get work permit struggling to meet financial need after sending them to other countries which has serious adverse effect to the people as well as to the nation. In turn, students who do for studies working hard day and night by doing part-time to settle financially which is seriously impacting their education. On the other side missing own family members to support mentally during their tough time causing major impact to their future.
To conclude, Modern world requires different exposure rather than struggling economically so people should think in balanced way to plan future since we have more opportunities available in our country too.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, so, well, while, another thing, as to, for instance, such as, as well as, first of all, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2013.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 385.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22857142857 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69705710948 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 176.041082164 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61038961039 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 628.2 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.2902465279 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.833333333 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3888888889 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.22222222222 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229130051162 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0636292943556 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0471196527511 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114299679383 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0453255699551 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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