These days people spend more and more time at work and less time at home.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?
In recent years, the work pattern has changed a lot. Nowadays, the individual use to spend their maximum time at work instead of home. There are various advantages and disadvantages of this pattern which are discussed in subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, firstly, money is an important aspect to live life happily. Despite fixed working hours, people work extra in order to get high incentives. They believe money is only life and prefer to provide a luxurious life to their family. Secondly, during office hours they can learn new skills that cannot be learned while sitting at homes such as teamwork, leadership, and tolerance. Additionally, the job enhances their personality and adds dignity to their status. For instance, in metropolitan cities around 56 percent of companies allow their workers to work till late night so that they can generate results for the company and can grab high salaries as appreciation.
On the other hand, firstly, maximum working hours lead to stress and anxiety which deteriorates the health. Apart from this, the hectic schedule results in no time for exercise. Secondly, because of the busy schedule people do not have enough time to spend with their family for whom they work which in turn weakens the bond as a consequences conflicts start. To illustrate, the survey done by “The Time” reveals that approximately 65 percent of individuals agree that families face issues because of their hectic and busy work schedules.
To conclude, long working hours is an optimum source of money which has obvious advantages such as satisfying life with high status. However, it cost family bonds and health.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 79, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...changed a lot. Nowadays, the individual use to spend their maximum time at work ins...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, while, apart from, for instance, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1385.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16791044776 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64359022552 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608208955224 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.457266397 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.3333333333 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8666666667 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205437188574 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0695952789086 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0732975616668 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137782188575 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0911046779723 0.056905535591 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.41 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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