Think about the work you are doing or the future work. What are the most important characteristics you and the people around you must posses to be successfull for the job
I believe that hard-working is the most important characteristic I and the people must possess to be successful in the job. Hard-working helps us to overcome many difficult problems and have experience in our field more quickly. Besides, the employer will highly appreciate us because of this characteristic.
To start with overcoming many difficult problems, lazy people can not solve the problem because they do not spend time enough to have knowledge about the problem. We must pay attention and spend much time solving a difficult problem. For example, Ronaldo who is famous for soccer can’t kick the ball from a far distance. After a hard-working training, he can do it and his kick is so famous with who love football around the world.
Furthermore, our boss never highly appreciates people who are lazy at work. Hard-working means that we can contribute more time, more money for our company which receives a benefit for this. Our boss will appreciate us and take us to the position which we deserve to be.
In conclusion, hard-working is most important characteristics we all should posses
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 51, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...with overcoming many difficult problems, lazy people can not solve the problem be...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, furthermore, if, so, for example, in conclusion, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 41.998997996 40% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 923.0 1615.20841683 57% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 182.0 315.596192385 58% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07142857143 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 4.20363070211 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00810501972 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 176.041082164 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.598901098901 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 280.8 506.74238477 55% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.4052962381 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 83.9090909091 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5454545455 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.90909090909 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221577896388 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0963002939219 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0925047453466 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157387488307 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0504317033385 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 78.4519038076 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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