The threat of nuclear weapons maintains the world peace Nuclear power provides cheap and clean energy The benefits of nuclear technology far out weight the disadvantages

It has been argued that the invention of nuclear technology has more advantages than disadvantages, as it's not only a source of cheap energy, but the nuclear weapons have also maintained peace worldwide. In my opinion, I agree with this, as it all depends upon the way of usage like generation of electricity and ensuring a peaceful environment are beneficial for mankind.
On the one hand, the main purpose of advancement in the field of nuclear science was to produce an atomic bomb for the future battlefield. Later on, it was realized that it's so destructive that it has made generations crippled. This led to a creation of a belief that it's dangerous for our future siblings and an idea to abandon its use became famous. Now, it's a treaty signed by all the nuclear nations that they will not use this devastating weapon at any cost. This, ultimately, has ensured peace all over the globe. For example, the creation of the United Nations was also to prevent war and ensure tranquility all around.
On the other hand, peaceful people devised ways to use this technique for the creation of energy which is not only cheap but also environmentally friendly. Firstly, the power generated from a nuclear reaction costs less than the hydroelectric or oil generated electricity. Secondly, it's cleaner and maintains the air pollution free. Furthermore, it also provides an alternate source of. For instance, the Russians are at the top in utilizing nuclear resources for the betterment of mankind.
To conclude, it's rightly said and I believe that the outcome of an experiment depends upon its future usage, like the world has become peaceful and has also overcome the crises of energy shortage, by correct usage of nuclear reactors.

Votes
Average: 8.7 (2 votes)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, second, secondly, so, as to, for example, for instance, in my opinion, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1443.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9587628866 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81297034528 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556701030928 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.9252307827 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.071428571 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7857142857 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.14285714286 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224778611158 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0770451131315 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0772788770724 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157936919761 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0554744612572 0.056905535591 97% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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