Throughout the history, people dream to build a perfect society while they haven't agreed how the ideal society would be like. What is the most important element you think to make a perfect society? How do people do to achieve an ideal society?
Over the centuries, people are thinking to construct an ideal society. Even though, they don't have a gist of how to fulfill this dream. The key factor for the perfection of society is the excellent infrastructure. For achieving the ideal community both government as well as people should come together.
To begin with, better infrastructure is the primary aspect to look for making better community, which involves public transport, roads and housing plans. For instance, The Times newspaper conducted a voting for worlds best infrastructure in 2012, in that Japan was the foremost with 33%.
Furthermore, if the moral values could be inculcated in the youth than the crime rate will decline. Moral lessons should be introduced to youth as, nowadays, they are not interested in the moral learning. As a result, juvenile crime rate is on the rise in recent years. Learning these values, the adolescence will lead to path which would be for betterment of society.
Finally, the medical facilities should be best for the improvement of the community and increasing the quality of life. The government should take necessary steps for providing better treatment for the poor and could take help from the private organisation for the wealthier ones. In this way, the standard of living would increase exponentially. To illustrate, the Western countries are receiving free medical facilities, on behalf of that they just need to pay taxes to the state authorities.
To conclude, the important aspect for making perfect community is infrastructure as well as basic values and medical facilities will be added advantage in favour of society but it cannot be made with the authorities alone, people should also take part in building the society they have dreamt of.
- Higher education could be funded in three ways. All costs paid by the government, all costs paid by students or students paying all cost through a government loan. What are the advantages of these choices? 67
- Write a letter to complain about a dangerous situation when some adolescents let their dogs run wild in public. 78
- Completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a good job. On the other hand, other people think that getting experience and developing soft skills is more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion. 73
- You are studying for a qualification, and you would like some time off work to complete it.Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:Ask for some time off to complete a qualification.Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off.Say how 73
- Some people consider price as the most important thing to think about when buying product (such as cellphone) or service (eg: medical treatment). Do you agree or disagree? 11
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 90, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...uct an ideal society. Even though, they dont have a gist of how to fulfill this drea...
^^^^
Line 1, column 265, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
...ing the ideal community both government as well as people should come together. To begi...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 212, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'worlds the best'.
Suggestion: worlds the best
... Times newspaper conducted a voting for worlds best infrastructure in 2012, in that Japan w...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, furthermore, if, look, so, well, for instance, as a result, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1490.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22807017544 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86326539186 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564912280702 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.7902721533 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.3333333333 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193681666546 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0651709914522 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0747177394081 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122664720867 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119819182767 0.056905535591 211% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.