Today the internet has replaced traditional books as a source of information. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this development?
Technological developments are growing by leaps and bounds and replacing the ancient ways of doing activities. One such advancement has been seen in the education sector where e-learning has surpassed the old methods of reading a book. This development has its merits and demerits
To begin with, one of the main reasons for using online platforms is due to the convenience provided by it. In other words, one can access online books from wherever they want to, even they can read them in any corner of the world. Unlike the hard copies, there is no need to carry with them. Secondly, it is also considered as eco-friendly because no trees are cut to produce paper. Therefore, one can act in a more responsible manner to deal with environmental problems by shifting on online books.
However, despite the benefits, this development also has some downsides.
Firstly, continuous screening on e-gadgets have severely impacted the eyes of youngsters. Owing to this, the majority is forced to wear spectacles as their eyes were severely affected by the blue to light emitted from the screens. Moreover, online surfing is an addiction and people tend to waste their crucial time on useless things.
As a consequence, they end up losing their focus on a certain work and redundantly procrastinate their work
In conclusion, indeed, the internet is an excellent source for providing information in terms of flexibility and convenience. However, it also has few drawbacks as one might lose concentration while completing important works. So one should make up their mind, and try to avoid irrelevant distractions and concentrate on their priorities.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1388.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19850187266 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9732968782 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651685393258 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.2409544813 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.1428571429 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0714285714 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.21428571429 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116335455268 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.034669734437 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0411210534205 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0628757406303 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0557680044469 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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