In the contemporary era, it is becoming popular that people from different generation work together in the same office. From my perspective, the disadvantages of this phenomenon are eclipsed by advantages since the experience of older people can be beneficial for the young generation in taking the right decision.
To commence with, when the younger workers work with senior employees, they get the opportunity to gain enormous knowledge from the experience of seniors. After spending many years in the same company, the older workers become completely aware of the policies and strategies of the company and they become efficient and skilled in the task. Therefore, they can train their juniors by amending errors at each and every stage. For instance, in a survey, it was found that young employees who work with professional employees take less time to become proficient as compared to their counterparts. Furthermore, when both types of workers work together, the company flourishes because the blend of experience of seniors and enthusiasm of youngsters will be fruitful and will be beneficial in boosting the economy.
On the flip side, although it is advantageous for the youngsters to work with the old generation, it has some downsides as well since there is a difference in the opinion of two generations which can lead to numerous conflicts among them. Hence, these differences will definitely hinder the work performance which will be an impediment to the progress and development of the company.
To recapitulate, it can be stated if the differences between the generations are removed, then the companies can accomplish great success.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ces between the generations are removed, then the companies can accomplish great ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, if, so, then, therefore, thus, well, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1396.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30798479087 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01888689632 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574144486692 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.6389734068 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.6 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.9 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130554012981 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0573673636035 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0636491751296 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0987075006631 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0780471291412 0.056905535591 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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