The trading market in the food industry between countries has developed overwhelmingly over the years. It is claimed that many nations nowadays have cooperated with each other to sell and consume large quantities of food internationally. This essay will discuss both viewpoints before giving a reasoned opinion.
On the one hand, importing food from foreign countries can hold shortcomings pertaining to food safety. Since the products such as vegetables, fruits, and many livestock commodities are bred and nourished outside of one’s territory, the government of importing nations can not interfere in the growing process. There are major risks concerning toxic additives and preservatives in food that make it look more appealing and fresher to lure consumers into purchasing. Also, some products can be genetically modified and can adversely affect the human’s physical health, this can lead to unwanted responses namely allergic, organ damage, or gene transfer. According to the Centers for Disease Control and Prevention, there was a bloom in food-borne illnesses between 2009 and 2010 and over 50% of the statistics are imported products.
On the other hand, however, the food import industry also proved to be beneficial to some extent. The trading market helps boost national growth enormously since many countries are able to sell their native products overseas as well as import a variety of delicacies from others. With the international food market, consumers are offered a wide range of goods that are not produced in their home country, which potentially leads to an increase in consumption due to its novelty. Moreover, by exporting specialized regional products and simultaneously importing food that cannot be homegrown, the authority can maximize its profits and therefore contribute to the national progress as a whole.
By way of conclusion, even though there are some drawbacks regarding food safety, imported products are believed to encourage economic growth. I believe that once the farming procedures are strictly approved and controlled by the government, high-quality products can be bought worldwide without any health concerns.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, well, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1836.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.56363636364 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94905628397 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621212121212 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 568.8 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7555827342 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.142857143 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5714285714 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.85714285714 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205534774714 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0750112357448 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0503523388946 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123970382288 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0452808290481 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.14 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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