Today many people get married and have children when they are in their 30’s rather than when they were younger. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Today, many people do not like to have the children when they just get married but they want children when they reach 30 years age. Firstly, my essay will discuss how it is good for people to focus on work till they reach good position at work before having kids. Secondly will discuss on how mother must prepare in 30 than in 20 to have child as she would be too busy to have a child.
These days children after study want to get good job and earn money so not depend on parents. It is more benefit to have child later than having in the 20’s because the first years of working is difficult for all. For example, when on new job after college, too much pressure to show the boss and everything new. Also when get little older get more mature. This is reason why it is positive development to have children later after settlement.
The negative when we have child in 30 for a girl is that it is too much difficult to keep time out when working. When married people are working for many year they get used to this type life and have no time to make baby. For example, it is difficult choice for a lady working as doctor to stop working to have baby. This is why it is negative to have children later,
In conclusion in my opinion I think that this is a positive trend as it is better to have money and not depend on parents so it is better to have child when 30 plus. If we get child in 20 is negative as it is a no money no mature situation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 387, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... she would be too busy to have a child. These days children after study want to ...
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Line 2, column 314, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...re to show the boss and everything new. Also when get little older get more mature. ...
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Line 3, column 150, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun year seems to be countable; consider using: 'many years'.
Suggestion: many years
...ng. When married people are working for many year they get used to this type life and hav...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, for example, i think, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1166.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.12014134276 5.12529762239 80% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.07254585377 2.80592935109 74% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.452296819788 0.561755894193 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 369.0 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8596320867 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.6923076923 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7692307692 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92307692308 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.414858922204 0.244688304435 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.157761191481 0.084324248473 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.13338897301 0.0667982634062 200% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.260465845938 0.151304729494 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.079808799772 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.0946893788 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 50.2224549098 150% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.62 12.4159519038 53% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.35 8.58950901804 74% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 78.4519038076 38% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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