today more and more tourists are visiting places with difficult conditions such as the Sahara Desert or Antarctica. what is the benefit and disadvantage of this?
In recent times it has been noticed that more people choose difficult places to explore during their vacation. The new trends has both positive and negative effects. on the upside it helps tourist take on something challenging, different from the norm. on the downside, it could pose a threat to their health and life.
one of the ways we experience growth and learn new things is by facing difficult situations, something outside the usual. This is one driving force behind the decision to explore something difficult. A study published by Psychology Times states that 70% of new ideas, innovations, and solutions are born out of tough situation. hard conditions makes an person's survival instinct kick in, which leads to thinking in directions they would normally not look. So a tourist exploring places with difficult conditions is good for their personal growth and learning, this outcomes is a strong reason why people keep exploring places like the Sahara desert and Antarctic. For example, a colleague at work traveled to a country near the North pole for her annual leave, it was surprising because she has not lived anywhere that cold, when I asked her why, she said she wanted something different, a place different from what she knows. she came back a brand new individual.
Harsh weathers have a way of negatively affecting the health of people. Like during cold conditions there are reports of increased allergy, asthma attacks, frostbite, and other health related problem. Also, during hot weathers there have been an increase in cases of heat stroke, skin reactions, dehydration and hypotension. When people visit places with extreme environment they may have an increased risk of developing health complication which may need to hospitalization or even death. For example in 2008, 10 tourist involved in a natural disasters in one of such places.
In conclusion, the new trends of tourist exploring tough places has its pros and cons. on a positive note it is an opportunity to gain knowledge and improve. But, if things go wrong the health and life of such tourist will be at risk.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, may, so, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1769.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08333333333 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70579204838 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597701149425 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 530.1 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.9271078771 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.1052631579 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3157894737 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.94736842105 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203982019374 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0494661006817 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0596378441198 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107161383617 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0269891099195 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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