Today, Tourism is one of the major industry which is culminated one country's economy and is rapidly growing all over the world. Although, earth holds gratifying and astonishing abundant places to visit, but still some spots which human being cannot exist, live and survey. One of the article said, 92.3% of tourists are choosing to explore those kinds of places which would make unnecessary tension to the government. As proof, recently, one tourist who originated from America and planned to explore Andaman, But he had visited Sentinel Island which government announced as prohibited area, has been killed by Sentinel people is became immense issue last year.
Moreover, the government should organize sessions which represents what are all the necessary things tourist should do, in case emergency situation happens to them and whom they have to contact first. The government has to sensitize people whoever wants to visit other country.
Even though, it is quite convoluted to describe the security vulnerabilities to the people, but it is up to them to take it forward. My opinion would be, without affecting nature, if we could luxuriate in our self, the place where we wanted to see is fair enough. In spite of natural disasters such as land sliding, tsunami, hurricane, avalanche, there are plenty of places which humans could explore and enjoy their time.
In conclusion, even though there are quite drawbacks, but still delight in what nature devoted to us. The Government should disseminate awareness to posterity to avert how tourism impacts.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, so, still, as to, in conclusion, such as, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1313.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23107569721 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60674097112 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.653386454183 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1528183823 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.363636364 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8181818182 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.18181818182 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172658841935 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0551982424865 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0355065114213 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0833638607941 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0417905044115 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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