In this contemporary era, we are witnessing an increasing number of people who are attracted to visit unique, less touchable areas in the world with harsh climate to keep up with such as the Sahara or the antarctic. Visiting these places can bring both favourable and unfavourable aspects to their visitors which will be all discussed further in this essay.
To embark upon let me highlight the merits of this popular trend of going to less-visited places. Actually, all the tourists are really fatigued from going to ordinary places such as the Eiffel tower or khalifa tower even they are still appealing and impressive., to be exact, they are in seek of breathtaking areas to adventure. Tourists who visit these special areas are of the opinion that going to Sahara or other less-common places in would bring them countless of virtues, to highlight one it can broaden their perspectives on life, they can learn many novel things such as how to make a fire, how to make a natural shower or how to build a strong tent to sleep in at night. all these new activities are at the same time challenging and exciting to experience. Along with this doing these aforementioned activities can boost their confidence and creativity to face other dilemmas in their own lives.
Despite all the fruitful impacts, there are some shortcomings tourists will confront during these trips. First and foremost as their bodies are not really adaptable to extremely hot or cold climates they may become ill.
Secondly, tourists may be at risk of being hurt or injured by wild animals if they do not have the awareness of how to deal with them. Lastly, Tourists may be affected by the loss of refreshments such as water or food since these places certainly offer inadequate facilities to visitors.
By way of conclusion, Visiting places which are not really tourist-friendly have gone up these days. This trend brings positive and negative features to visitors nonetheless, if tourists visit these areas, equipped and with full awareness of that region, dire consequences would dilute greatly to almost 20-30 percent but not zero.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, if, lastly, may, nonetheless, really, second, secondly, so, still, as to, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1766.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 354.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98870056497 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73131559974 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559322033898 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 550.8 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.8723452225 49.4020404114 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.846153846 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2307692308 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92307692308 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211926300678 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0772797635405 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0568480386957 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120686434106 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0436607203061 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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