Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as Sahara desert or the Antarctic.
What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?
Nowadays traveling to odd or bad condition targets is becoming more popular than ever before. However, there are several positives and negatives associated with this kind of special trip.
On the one hand, choosing this sort of journey may consist of some advantages. Firstly, it might help to discover new places and as a consequence some new natural resources. For example, new iron, copper, gold, precious stones or other kinds of mines may be discovered by tourists. Secondly, these trips would cause positive psychology effects on them. It certainly will be a long nice relaxation especially mental ones, because there is no congestion, pollution, traffic, or other annoying noise. It may satisfy another part of humankind’s instinct, adventuring and exploring new things and bushwalking as well. Finally, it would aid tourism industry and economic thrift of aborigines, if there are any people living there. In addition, an international friendship will be made among different nations especially if these trips occur in a cosmopolitan way.
On the other hand, there are some difficulties and problems included in these tours. The most important issue is various types of expected and unexpected dangers. For instance, broken bones because of likely accidents, different illness and diseases, wild animal attacks, reptiles’ bites may happen and there would not be ample drugs or treatments or other medical cares that may cause death, unfortunately. Another difficulty is climate, hot weather, storm, snow, thunders, etc., which will affect the tourists and the tour. Usually during these trips all connection devices are useless, and tourists will lose contact with their families. Even, they may lose the path and as a result may run out of food or deficit drinking water. On the other flip side, these sorts of tours are too expensive.
In conclusion, while experiencing unknown places has some good aspects like discovering new coordinates and resources, gaining spirit relaxation, helping local economy growth and making new friendships, there are some dangers and problems to be tackled, for instance body injuries, risk of getting lost, losing connection with family, etc.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 840, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a cosmopolitan way" with adverb for "cosmopolitan"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...nations especially if these trips occur in a cosmopolitan way. On the other hand, there are some dif...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, sort of, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1859.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43567251462 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82577341328 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 176.041082164 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.663742690058 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 576.9 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.3486163299 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.277777778 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0555555556 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0633053803579 0.244688304435 26% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0176455861932 0.084324248473 21% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0255323925142 0.0667982634062 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0420697074306 0.151304729494 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0132734933286 0.056905535591 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.8 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 78.4519038076 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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