Of late, tourism development authority of the world has released the new survey, and the statistics in the reports are both surprising and shocking. The number of visitors to the remote destination places such as Sahara Desert or to the Antarctic has been increased drastically. In this essay I will discuss both advantages and disadvantages of this latest trend.
According to the tourists, there are many benefits in visiting the remote destinations. First and foremost, would be they want to escape from their daily routine and to have some exiting entrainment in life. Traveling to such places makes them unique in their friends and relatives and they can share their overwhelming experience in the social media websites. Second, it gives them much more confident they need and this confidence could assist to lead any situations in their own lives.
On the other hand, there are numerous disadvantages or drawbacks associated with this. First, the accommodation in remote destination might not be comfortable compared to any other travel destinations. Second, the security of the tourists is one of the main concerns, because the probabilities of getting stuck in the unexpected weather conditions are high. For example, sand storm in deep desert or getting attacked by the wild animals while doing wild life safari. Also, if any tourists plan to enjoy the night campaign in the deep forest, then they will get exposed to mosquitoes or to poisonous snakes.
To conclude, yes travelling to uncertain places can be exiting and this could be a vacation of lifetime. However, the tourists must take extra measures for their own safety and they should be ready to face unexpected weather conditions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, second, so, then, while, for example, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1433.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19202898551 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83412782145 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.601449275362 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.3335398436 49.4020404114 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 102.357142857 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7142857143 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42857142857 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19312905099 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.057882772954 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0560515671238 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101350509368 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0200210719513 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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