Today more people are travelling than ever before.
Why is this the case?
What are the benefits of travelling to the traveller?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
In the past, travelling was somehow impracticable to some parts of the globe but nowadays, an increasing number of people are travelling to their favourite destination than in the past. The main reasons for this growth are due to globalisation and excellent transportation network. This has benefited both business people and tourists.
Firstly, the major reasons for people travelling a lot recently are globalisation and efficient transportation system. That is to say, before, countries practice protectionism and there were no multi-national companies, therefore, no need for experts to work in foreign nations. But, ever since the world became a global village, there is always need for expatriates in foreign countries, most especially developing nations. Furthermore, excellent and efficient road network motivates people to travel more to their favourite destinations for holidays. Finally, a recent jump in budget flights, particularly in Europe, has encouraged many low and middle income families to take up vacations abroad.
Individuals derive different benefits for travelling to other areas. In other words, satisfaction depends on the purpose of the travel. For instance, a businessman travels to meet clients or investors which will be economic gain for him. Tourists, on the other hand, travel to experience new cultures, traditions and customs. This will help foster global understanding and acceptance of others. Also, some learn foreign languages in the course of their journey.
In conclusion, an increasing number of individuals are travelling recently than before as a result of global economy and the improvement of transport infrastructures. Consequently, travellers derive gain from making their journey.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, in other words, on the other hand, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1485.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.77821011673 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23729796419 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610894941634 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.4683614337 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.8125 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0625 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8125 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275874092027 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0936706611098 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0556177276527 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17213951534 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0275119877094 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.95 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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