Today more people are travelling than ever before. Why is this the case? What are the benefits of traveling for the traveller?
In present-day when everything is so accessible and connected, people tend to travel much more than before. there are many theories to explain this trend.
There are many explanations but that the more relevant one is accessibility and being connected. As we nowadays know visiting any part of the world is much easier due to the development of transport systems. This evolved transportation allow people easily to move from one part to the other without much trouble.
Secondly, with connectivity channels with radio, television and internet etc have brought in a lot of exposure to different places, customs, etc enticing people to seek experience travelling to places. For example, if a documentary is shot in Cambodia showing the rich, culture, history and nature people tend to want to go experience it for themselves.
Unlike the previous generation, it was vital for people to amass wealth to secure future for them and their family but nowadays that mentality has shifted. People these days tend to spend a lot of money without worrying about saving for the future. This mind shift might be a result of increased job security and increasing buying power.
There are several advantages fo travelling to a country not only exposes you to cultures, traditions that are different than your own but also broadens your perspective and worldview on many aspects of life.
Travelling opens up an avenue for an individual and provides them with opportunities to experience something new that they may have never experienced before. As an example, someone who has stayed most of his/her life in a desert or hot and humid climate may now travel to a place at a higher altitude to experience snow.
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Message: Did you mean 'different 'from''? 'Different than' is often considered colloquial style.
Suggestion: from
...cultures, traditions that are different than your own but also broadens your perspec...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, second, secondly, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1435.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10676156584 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82021677792 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622775800712 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.4032556245 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.384615385 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6153846154 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.07692307692 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276438078386 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.085335947939 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0638138644851 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133297474233 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0670400145408 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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