Today more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as Sahara desert or the Antarctic
What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?
In recent times, holidaymakers are opting for extreme difficult surviving places like Sahara desert or Antarctic etc. There are<span class="hiddenGrammarError" pre="There "></span> advantages and disadvantages of these type of places. This essay will illustrate about both the sides.
Excursionists often wish to discover new places, as they are adventures . Mainly the youth, who are amateur, they tend to experience how they can survive in extreme bad weather condition, without any comfort, or without least to zero surviving equipment. They generally have the tendency to know about the places that how the places were formed especially isolated or hostile one. Many of them are in the profession and some have the passion for knowing the new places. Alternatively, some of them want to make Guinness world records for instance many of the mountaineers have climbed Mt. Everest and created the world record, adventourist bear grills shows us how we can still survive with minimum or no food, water. In addition to that, these travellers want to experience nature from very near.
There are also many disadvantages of these types of hobbies. As if they travel to some isolated places and if they need any medical emergencies then they may not be able to get it. This may put their life to risk, for the beginners experiencing these kind of extreme conditions can be challenging. If in case of these tourists get lost the country has to spend a lot of money to rescue them.
Overall, I would conclude that despite of many travellers is discovering the new places there are many benefits that would make the individual special in crowd. However, there are consequences of these type of activities. Therefore, every person has to measure their abilities to survive in extreme conditions.
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Suggestion: .
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Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... extreme conditions can be challenging. If in case of these tourists get lost the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, so, still, then, therefore, as to, for instance, in addition, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1521.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22680412371 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.38579837056 2.80592935109 121% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584192439863 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.7584399248 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0625 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1875 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8125 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127705982006 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0394649838449 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0468966694406 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0770176015543 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.022916684672 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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