Nowadays, people settle-in with a life partner after they have completed their education and have started working for sometime. In my opinion, delay in choosing a life partner and consequently delaying birth of their young ones has a negative effect in life stages.
The most compelling reason for believing this is because of the complexities involved while delivering a child. There are many people around the world, due to work stress are unable to plan family earlier. But, a woman is considered most fertile during early years of her life especially during her mid- twenties. Also, medical institutions encourage woman to give birth and complete their family as soon as possible. To exemplify, the percentage of people seeking medical help to conceive through various other methods like IVF is on a steep rise. Hence, to avoid such complications in life, people should try to settle earlier in life.
Another reason, is due to delay in marriage & birth could cause critical medical problems for the mother as well as for the newborn. For instance, woman who deliver after 35 years of age is more likely to get gestational diabetes or other medical related problems like blood pressure etc. and as for the newborn might have congenital abnormalities. Therefore, both men and women should carefully plan out their life if they wish to have a happy and healthy family. The future generations are purely dependent on today's world practices.
Lastly, the costs associated with the above are exorbitant. Firstly, paying to conceive and thereafter the expenses relating to pregnancy related complications are definitely draining. Most of the insurance companies do not cover such costs and are paid from individual's out- of pocket expenses. This in turn affects the quality of living momentarily for the whole family. Thus, leading to its vicious affects throughout the various life stages of a person.
In conclusion, the rising trend of people getting married and giving birth during thirties is causing a negative impact on the whole world due to medical reasons and health related costs affecting the lifestyle. Given this situation, the widening gap between generations should be reduced by prudent mindset and necessary steps should be taken immediately by the government to protect the world from ageing and maintaining ecological balance.
- You have received a bill from a mobile phone company for international call charges relating to a time when you did not use your phone for international call Write a letter to company Complaining about this Giving your reasons Asking for bill to be change 94
- Today most people get married and gave birth in their thirties rather than when they are younger Is this a positive or negative development 84
- Write a letter to the local council about the poor condition of roads in your area Include the following in your letter Explain the situation and roads condition How does it affect you and other people Suggest what measures need to be taken in your opinio 89
- Your internet connection has been slow and intermittent Write a letter to your internet service provider to complain In the letter Describe the problem and why you are unhappy Arrange for an engineer to visit your home Request a reduction in your bill 95
- Advertising influences people to buy things such as clothes and shoes What are the problems caused by that What solutions can be given 61
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, hence, if, lastly, so, therefore, thus, well, while, as for, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1982.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 376.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27127659574 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70986292847 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587765957447 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 621.9 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.291425248 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.1 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168423296045 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0446555779696 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.040414419412 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0910566784819 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0352140451902 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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