The advancement of technology make it easier for the people to get the kind of food that they wanted at their home. Todays
transportation and logistics sector should be credited for this scenario. Aeroplanes and trains are used to transport food items from far away places within a short period of time. I strongly believe that it is a positive trend.
First of all, it will be a great help to the producers of certain kind of food. They can find a global market for their product rather than the domestic market. Since the globalisation era, every countries economy is open to the world, so anyone can export any legal items to another country's market. For instance, Indian mangos are very famous around the world, earlier it was very difficult to get in another parts of the world. Now the situation has entirely changed, it is been exported to all around the world and anyone can enjoy its unique taste.
Secondly, these exports helps the country to earn foreign money. Many of the developing countries entire economy is depending up on this income. For example, if we take the example of meat export, India holds the leading positon with staggering quantity of 20,000 tonnes per year. It contributes almost 30% of the india's foreign money. Furthermore, these exports of food items also helpful to meet the demand of food in under developed countries, there people are facing malnutrition problem because of unavailability of adequate food supply.
Last but not least, some fruit items are purely seasonal like apple and orange. These world wide exports ensure the availability such kind of foods all around the year. Moreover these mass travel of food help the people to get a chance to experience any food items according to their taste and preference.
To recapitulate, it is evident that these mass exports of food items around the world is definitely a positive trend and this will continue to reach new heights in terms export quantity.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: period
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'countries'' or 'country's'?
Suggestion: countries'; country's
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Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: worldwide
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Message: Did you mean 'worldwide'?
Suggestion: worldwide
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, as for, for example, for instance, kind of, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1629.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92145015106 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53325379616 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586102719033 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0587845524 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.5 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3888888889 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.83333333333 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143770828573 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0482746235979 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0573970490633 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0909250261219 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0548332744867 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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