Topic : Some people think that it is a good idea of all employees to wear a uniform at work. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Many companies and organizations are making uniform necessary for their employees. However, while some people feel that wearing a dress code should be a mandatory part of their workplace, I would argue that, which is helpful, it should remain the staff's choice.
One of the most significant benefits of wearing a uniform is the time that people might save on buying clothes. This is important because staff can utilize this time in other ways such as being with family and friends, exercising and so on. For instance, having more leisure time for your own pleasure directly affects your mental health and it also motivates in different ways such as working harder for our goals, which is beneficial for both individual and society. Thus, wearing a uniform can give employees more free time which is very precious.
Nevertheless, it is vital that what to wear be the sole choice of the workforce as making such tasks compulsory may breed resentment towards work. The reason for this is that people are naturally averse to do anything which seems imposed upon them. Consequently, this resentment may lead to poor quality work, negatively affecting both the staff and the employer itself. In contrast, if the employees decided to wear uniform at work, this is more likely to produce a feeling of self-worth and job satisfaction, contributing to better work.
In conclusion, although imposing rules on staff to wear a uniform may help to utilize their time better, I believe such regulation should not be imposed on staff as this may foster negatively towards the tasks.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, thus, while, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1315.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03831417625 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65513647673 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578544061303 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.2923036389 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.545454545 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7272727273 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1818181818 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168301663827 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0724042787062 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0511256435993 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101225146463 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0530914088311 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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