Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
We live in an age where number of male and female students are not equal in every subject in the university. People are divided in their opinion regarding equality of male and female students in each subject. Actually it’s a controversy issue. My opinion is that it is not necessary to accept same amount of male and female students in every subject. As I oppose the view and my reason will be explained in the following paragraphs.
Let us take a look at recent statistics that shows that day to day females are become more educated compare to man. They take their desire place on their own capabilities despite of several obstacles. If there is make any criteria about equality it maybe happen that women are more deserving candidate then man and as because there will be equality issue only 50% seats remain for them. Thus despite of having capabilities few will be cannot take seat as they are above then 50%.
Furthermore we also have to consider that it also can be happen that because of equality policy, few talented male students cannot get chance at university for good subject. It can be happen that that in particular subject there are not that much desirable female candidates compare to male students. Thus this system may not be workout properly. Apart from that in our country, we know that as a female student it is quite tough to get outside for education purpose. Thus they need equality in some extent but in education system or at particular subject it does not necessary. Besides that, if we want to make equality in subject choice in university we need to make equality in every working sector otherwise result will be not be fruitful.
Another point worth noting is we need to implement equality in merit rather than gender. Needless to say that in education merit students should get chance first rather equality policy. In that maybe female get more chance because of their merit than male students automatically. To draw the conclusion I will strongly disagree of the equality system.
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- Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, but, first, furthermore, if, look, may, regarding, so, then, thus, apart from, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1678.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82183908046 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51447783011 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.491379310345 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 568.8 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.1015675651 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.3157894737 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3157894737 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.15789473684 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305489762039 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10067507488 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0956064493246 0.0667982634062 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191204863397 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109417874183 0.056905535591 192% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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