The use of social media is replacing face-to-face interaction among many people in society. Do you thiink advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
In the days and ages, community by multimedia platforms is increasingly getting more prevalent than real interaction among people. There are a host of controversial opinions about its merits and demerits. Some people take sides with the former view while others concur with the latter one. The following essay will shed light on clearly the pros and cons of this debatable issue.
It is not denied that thanks to the innovation of technology, manifold things in daily life which we can benefit, the community is not an exception. Looking at the advantages, social media such as facebook, Instagram, twitter and other platforms help us easily to contact in every time, everywhere, every case. Although your friends or family are far from you, you are capable of calling or texting messages to them with a quick and conventional way by only a smartphone. Not only has remove distance but it also saves a lot of time for users. Besides, interacting on social media has many functions like posting daily, commenting, reacting our emotion and it present for the rapid development of technology in a modernized society.
However, depending on online community also lead to a great number of problems that we can easily see. Firstly, it has resulted in healthy matters, especially diseases related to the eyes, nervous system, and psychology. Social media interaction requires a massive online hour and makes people become hot potatoes soon. Similarly, it accidentally reduces the ability of community skills and increases the lack of social experiences that need to have to survive. In a terrible case, many people rely on anonymous accounts to attack someone or do illegal acts.
In brief, the replacement of online interaction with social media from the traditional community has both benefits and disadvantages. In the future, humans have the responsibility to balance two ways in order to create a developed society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'hosts'?
Suggestion: hosts
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Message: Did you mean 'presents'?
Suggestion: presents
...commenting, reacting our emotion and it present for the rapid development of technology...
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Line 5, column 135, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ty has both benefits and disadvantages. In the future, humans have the responsibil...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, similarly, so, while, in brief, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1649.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23492063492 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89132288881 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647619047619 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 535.5 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.2967154412 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5294117647 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.52941176471 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173900946068 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0446702061722 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0529733455838 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0779279142193 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0456932542969 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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