Nowadays, the uses of social networking sites are discouraging real interaction. While this phenomenon has a variety of benefits, I believe it’s drawbacks outweigh its advantages.
On the one hand, social media is benficial to individuals by accelerating the flow of information, which develop the nations’ modernization. Firstly, in the technological revolution, getting access to the internet is easy, which allow everyone to keep abreast of news. For instance, inhabitants can be given notices about meetings and festivals by facebook, which raise their chances to enrol in those events. Secondly, there are various opportunities for people to communicate conviently by texting messages. With an account and a mobile phone, inhabitants can contact to others everywhere.
On the other hand, I firmly believe that social media has outweighed disadvantages on youngsters in this contemporary life. One reason is that the young can be over reliant on the internet if they aren’t endowed with essential knowledge about online scams. While some of them are mature and can not be secuded, many children addict to Facebook and Messengers, which are very interesting and entertaining. Furthermore, the internet are obstacle which can distract teenagers from their study because spending too much time surfing Facebook may mitigate a child concentration. For instance, teenagers usually study while listening to music and this may lead to bad results, both for their health and their scores.
Subsequently, weighning all the aforementioned, I would argue that the disadvantages of using internet websites outweigh the advantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1406.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.71544715447 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22101313867 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.630081300813 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.524787813 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 108.153846154 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9230769231 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53846153846 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143937947872 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0525140891195 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0454572108968 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0919449106154 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0143256411975 0.056905535591 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.9 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.92 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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