Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on your children.
Do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
You should write at least 250 words.
A computer, sure is a boon to all of us! It makes tasks pretty easy, like typing instead of writing with a pen and paper. It can also be used in a recreational way by playing games and taking a break from our mundane life. Specially for children, there are so many games on the computer that imporve langauge as well as learning. Internet sites like Google are quiet informative and usually children use the computer for such information which is, I feel quite a positive effect
On the other hand, it can have negative effects too. Children, at such a young age depend on computers for the smallest of things. At such an early age they are bound to get addicted to technology if a balance is not maintained. With fast growing technology, there are end number of games that children get addicted to. This might distract them from school and home work. Their conversations now a days are more inclined towards games and achievements of levels instead of school work and discussion on some important facts going on in the world. The graphics and sounds are so advanced and attractive to children that they just cannot resist but play these games on a daily basis. It has become a part of every child's routine.
There are computer games that allow friends and teammates to discuss strategies of the games with each other while playing which makes it even more interesting. This daily activity not only is time consuming but also stressing eyes. So many children at an early age have spectacles and a very huge cylindrical eye number. This is not healthy for children at such an early age.
Therefore, in my opinion, using computers, have indeed, many negative effects on children than positive effects.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 143, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a recreational way" with adverb for "recreational"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...th a pen and paper. It can also be used in a recreational way by playing games and taking a break fro...
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Line 1, column 479, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...which is, I feel quite a positive effect On the other hand, it can have negative ...
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Line 2, column 393, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
...hool and home work. Their conversations now a days are more inclined towards games and ach...
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Line 2, column 397, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
... and home work. Their conversations now a days are more inclined towards games and ach...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, well, while, i feel, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1406.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73400673401 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5496242548 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582491582492 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4428054314 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.875 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5625 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.9375 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154446501524 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0508989437843 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0486077563514 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111064080518 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0386607918021 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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