Using computer everyday can have more negative than positive effects on children. Do you agree or disagree?

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Using computer everyday can have more negative than positive effects on children. Do you agree or disagree?

The pace of mordern life helps our life more easily especially the appearance of techonology. Hence, it's not strike that children are exposed to computer very early. In my opinion, using computer everyday can have more negative than positive.

It was not accident that children feel totally at ease around compute. It is an invaluable resource to help young people explore the world on the tip of the finger. They are also able to take advantage of the wide range of services computer provide high and low.
Many people believe that computer is the best invetion of mankind. However,if you use computer all the time can occur a bad consequence.Firstly,the longer you use it, the more likely it is for you to addicted. When people become over-reliant on computer, they're certainly ready to neglect outdoor activities and such people constanly accustomed with sedentary life. In the future, they will find it hard to play or live in harmony with others. Definitely, it's so difficult to them to re-apt to other activites around them except sitting in front of computer's screen.It's not at all, the content of programme that they watch everyday on computer has an adverse effect. They have the capbility of imitate improper behaviour such as use alcoholic drinks, casual sex, drug abuse...etc without being aware of the health risks they carry

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: it's; it is
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Suggestion: every day
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...an have more negative than positive. It was not accident that children feel t...
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...rvices computer provide high and low. Many people believe that computer is the...
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, however, if, so, such as, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1120.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 223.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02242152466 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79412862605 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.659192825112 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 369.9 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.9475919392 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.3333333333 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5833333333 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284935502772 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0945045767984 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.127058710726 0.0667982634062 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186591713612 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11072270896 0.056905535591 195% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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