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SOME PEOPLE BELIEVE that handwriting is not suitable in the modern world and should not be taught in the schools. th what extenct do u agree?
Globally, in this modern world, the importance of writing is diminishing gradually with time and some individuals consider that teaching for the same should be prohibited in school campuses. This essay partially agrees with the sentence because contemporary typing is more convenient and saves our time, however, it sometimes creates eyesight issues.
Undoubtedly, with the advancement of computers it becomes so easier for people to write with key-pads to have a clear view. This can be explained by the fact that typing on the screen identifies clearly and does not create a chance of a mistake to read even though someone has poor handwriting. Besides this, with the usage of programming, we can write numerous patterns of writing with multi-colour option which makes it more superior than normal handwriting. On the top of that, it assists a lot to save people's imperative time. For example, In India, the vast majority of modern schools had adopted special typing classes for kids so that they can practice from their childhood only so that they can learn about it and able to apply it during thier study and professional life as well.
Neverthless, this evolvement has some negative effects too as continuos writing on the web screen sometimes results in poor vision problems. This is because, with focusing on the monitor, it decreases the power of human eyes in long times which is the most perilous issues found in the majority of offsprings nowadays. For example, due to computer classes, many small children have to wear a huge power of eyeglasses from their school period only.
In conclusion, although handwriting with a pen or a pencil reducing chances of eye related problems, it is more effective to write on the screen compared to writing on the pepar, therefore, I believe that principals have to give more importance to digital writing only.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 136, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Th
...nd should not be taught in the schools. th what extenct do u agree? Globally, i...
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Line 5, column 423, Rule ID: SUPERIOR_THAN[2]
Message: The adjective more is normally used with to and does not need 'more' (so called implicit comparative). Probably you need to write: 'superior to'.
Suggestion: superior to
...with multi-colour option which makes it more superior than normal handwriting. On the top of that,...
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Line 5, column 811, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...onal life as well. Neverthless, this evolvement has some ne...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, so, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1724.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16167664671 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71938709181 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580838323353 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.7975718779 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.615384615 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6923076923 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.30769230769 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.244688304435 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.084324248473 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.151304729494 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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