Undoubtedly the fact can't be denied that computer has become the backbone of mankind in this era. And we are so dependent on this sofisticated innovation that made our lives easy. I believe computer is most novel technological advancement due to many reasons but primarily for its reliability, convenience and its potential to do much more for us in the future.
Earlier times, when we hadn't computers, we used to keep records of hospitals, businesses etc in physical form. They were not only challenging to preserve for decades; but were equally prone to human errors if not verified by four eyes. Computers solved problem of storage with capability of keeping a heap of data in merely few square feet of space if not square inches. Also built-in algorithms ensures minimal or no human error in data recording.
Moreover, in today's ever hurrying society the need of convenience and faster sharing of information couldn't be imagined to be fulfilled without computers. We are able to transfer data about criminal records or flight bookings in seconds across globally connected computers via internet, that otherwise can't be possible.
In future too, the pace of advancing in computing technologies will take mankind to greater heights. I strongly believe that the brighter side of this rapidly growing technology has far superior prospectus, than any possible eyebrow raising points on the other side. Computers have been true friends of humans in all aspects of life and will continue to do wanders in the future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, second, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1277.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14919354839 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79029635919 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.685483870968 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.1950255644 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.416666667 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.91666666667 7.06120827912 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227056352637 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0716092770693 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0537400963768 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116613124229 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0309205530789 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.98 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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