We are becoming increasingly dependent on computer-based technology.
How do you think this will change in the future ?
Is it good for us to rely too much on computer ?
Computerized technology has seen numerous breakthroughs recently, which makes us have more and more reliance on it. This essay will cover how this advancement is triggering a revolution in manufacturing industries for years to come and the elucidate the negativity of heavily depending on it.
This cutting-edge technology is expected to revolutionize the world of manufacturing. By virtue of the ahead-of-the-time machinery, which is associated with absolute accuracy in every movement and meticulousness under the management of the computers, not only it will bolster efficiency but also, high-risk, or even fatal, however, unintended incidents will be minimized. Fully automated industrial complexes exemplify this, owning to the fact that fewer tragics jeopardising manual labours and exponential growth in productivity are registered. Moreover, these state-of-the-art models are becoming ubiquitous. Albeit there is scepticism regarding malfunctioning and disobedience of preprogrammed robotic parts to abrupt alteration, only a group of well-qualified maintainers is required to tackle any problem.
Concerning the reality that we are excessively relying on computers, we should be alerted about its adverse ramification, the threat from hackers for specific. Whilst up-to-date, protective software is convinced to be capable of intercepting cyberattacks, hacking methods are having fast-paced ameliorations. In long term, nearly no layer of protection might catch up with the sophistication of online nefarious actions, putting computer-relating activities in danger. The path to gain authority of American president-elect, Joe Biden, who is suspected to be concealing initial symptoms of Alzeimer and a puppet of hostile organizations, is a prime example with online votes from already dead American citizens.
To conclude, computer-attached equipment is forecasted to alter the face of manufacturers, nonetheless, more-than-enough dependence on computers has only drawbacks, especially the deterioration in the security of tasks demanding the use of these gadgets.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, nonetheless, regarding, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1792.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.15807560137 5.12529762239 120% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.77458834214 2.80592935109 135% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.697594501718 0.561755894193 124% => OK
syllable_count: 577.8 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.0 1.60771543086 124% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.6908222064 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.333333333 106.682146367 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.25 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182535828079 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0550445224507 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0475553554527 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101126878158 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0347869734868 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.7 13.0946893788 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 13.28 50.2224549098 26% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.4 11.3001002004 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 18.74 12.4159519038 151% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.83 8.58950901804 138% => OK
difficult_words: 129.0 78.4519038076 164% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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