We are becoming increasingly dependent on computer technology. It is used in
business, crime detection and even to fly planes.
What will it be used for in future ? Is the dependence on technology a good thing or
should we be suspicious of its benefits ?
Today computers and its technology have become an indispensable tool in our routine
life. In fact, we find it extremely difficult to get through a working day without using them and
their applications. This point is out that in future, there shall be even more usage of computer
technology; however, as per my opinion, this dependency may have some negative influence
too. Both, the future uses and my view and discussed further.
Referring to futuristic uses, the foremost application would be to create even more
sophisticated computers. They shall be working in all possible areas of life and work where
artificial intelligence is needed. For instance, computer technology shall be employed for
virtual tours to various destinations, DNA testing and to have super security at work and at
home. Besides this, such a technologies shall be used extensively for household chores. It is
predicted that domestic robots and computer systems shall manage the regular cooking,
cleaning and even reminding the masters what groceries are to be bought! At schools also
there would be a teacher less classes or more likely, the concept of real school may disappear.
It is predicted that there would be virtual teaching techniques and outline education all over.
Considering the second question, as mentioned, I surely believe that depending on
computer technology can show some serious effects. To begin with, professionals would be
working in a less formal setup due to computers. This can damage the work culture and skills
of the communication and being competitive. There may be a severe lack of creative ideas
amongst people. At school, as there shall be no real classroom sessions, the future students
may not experience the student teacher interaction, gathering peripheral knowledge while
studying and almost no chance to meet different personalities. On the other hand, at home
too, the art of traditional cooking and family time can vanish. To cap it all, with less physical
activities may health issues may arise and people would become lazy.
Thus, to conclude, it can be said that computer technology is a boon for the mankind
now I can become more useful in future; however, sincerely attention must be given that
mankind should not become the slave of it and lose his health, happiness and creativity.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
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Line 11, column 26, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a technology' or simply 'technologies'?
Suggestion: a technology; technologies
...t work and at home. Besides this, such a technologies shall be used extensively for household...
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...e mankind now I can become more useful in future; however, sincerely attention must be g...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, if, may, second, so, thus, while, for instance, in fact, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 24.0 7.85571142285 306% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1986.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 375.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.296 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84203370064 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594666666667 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 612.9 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.76152304609 252% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.6172969237 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.333333333 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8333333333 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.27777777778 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 26.0 4.38176352705 593% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280262019431 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0852983100416 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0465348681098 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0741291415553 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0528472113819 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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