Wealth does not necessarily guaranty happiness.
To what extent do you agree with this statement?
In today’s world, everybody is running towards money, everybody’s goal is to earn a lot of money. There are several opportunities to make money, but at the same time, you have a lot competition to overtake and reach your money goals. Even though cash helps the individuals to live a luxury life but it does not help them to live happily. People cannot buy happiness or love with money. I disagree with the statement that wealth does not guarantee happiness and I would discuss those points in the next two paragraphs.
The wealthiest people in this world are very famous and sometimes they are happier than a few others, but it does not always guarantee a happier life. By becoming richer you feel more stress to keep that money safe and at the same there are some real time examples where the criminals targe the wealthy people which the wealthy people life in danger and causing them to be secure and protected all the time. In those scenarios even though they have enough money they are not happy as others. The money real helps to buy and live the luxury life but it also has its disadvantages.
Several people in this world are billionaires and they found peace and happiness once they left the business and used their money to donate and help the poor. So being rich and helping the needy people or helping the community to grow gives happiness and fame to them. To help the community you don’t have to be rich you can donate some of the money you have or serve the community by working, so being rich may help in some instances but it does guarantee the happiness all the times.
As I have stated in the above two paragraphs, being rich or wealthy is good, but it does not guarantee a person to be happiest, several middle class and poor people are more happier then the wealthiest people in this world. You get happiness by doing what you love and by being loved by the people not because of the money.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 5, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
In today's world, everybody is runn...
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Line 5, column 277, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'criminals'' or 'criminal's'?
Suggestion: criminals'; criminal's
...e are some real time examples where the criminals targe the wealthy people which the weal...
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Line 7, column 338, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...n't have to be rich you can donate some of the money you have or serve the community b...
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Line 9, column 170, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'happier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: happier
...everal middle class and poor people are more happier then the wealthiest people in this worl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 10.4138276553 240% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1602.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60344827586 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40734462944 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.454022988506 0.561755894193 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 501.3 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.9761122518 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.428571429 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8571428571 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 7.06120827912 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121161168106 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0503167309194 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0527966485284 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0854664927393 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0333503242811 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 50.2224549098 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.7 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.91 8.58950901804 80% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.