Wealth does not necessarily guaranty happiness.To what extent do you agree with this statement? | TOEFL IELTS GMAT GRE SAT ACT PTE ESL

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Wealth does not necessarily guaranty happiness.

To what extent do you agree with this statement?

It is often convicted by the people that money cannot assure pleasure. I completely disagree to the notion because it is the only source through which all the source through which all chores and other activities performed except emotions. To embark upon, we are the members of the 21st century which is enormously affected by the factors like globalization and so on. Moreover, a significant portion of essentials of mankind such as education, knowledge, moments, celebrations, can only be accomplished with the help of sound financial stability. While, the individuals who do not have ample resources to participate in all such activities have always to compromise with their joy. Furthermore, above statement is not as pristine in the modern world as it used to be several years back. Additionally, professional courses and lavish wedding functions make humans feel elated. Similarly, this all can be fulfilled with sound financial position and stability.Therefore, money has direct relationship with the happiness. However, a set of people mostly consider that it is only the secondary source of entertainment while emotions, sentiments can never be calculated in terms of it. By and large, being poor or rich is separate thing. Society members rejuvenate themselves by participating and sharing moments with each other,despite of the quantum of currency they possess. Likewise, there are plethora of modes which brings satisfaction by overwriting the power of wealth. To conclude, I vehemently advocate that in this contemporary world funds plays a vital funds plays a vital role. Undoubtedly,it brings eminence, competition with its purchasing power and always propels humans towards a vibrant and cheerful life.
However, a set of people mostly consider that it is only the secondary source of entertainment while emotions, sentiments can never be calculated in terms of it. By and large, being poor or rich is separate thing. Society members rejuvenate themselves by participating and sharing moments with each other,despite of the quantum of currency they possess. Likewise, there are plethora of modes which brings satisfaction by overwriting the power of wealth.
To conclude, I vehemently advocate that in this contemporary world funds plays a vital funds plays a vital role. Undoubtedly,it brings eminence, competition with its purchasing power and always propells humans towards a vibrant and cheerful life.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 744, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... the help of sound financial stability. While, the individuals who do not have ample ...
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Suggestion: Therefore
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...nd large, being poor or rich is separate thing. Society members rejuvenate themse...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, likewise, moreover, second, similarly, so, therefore, while, such as, by and large

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2491.0 1615.20841683 154% => OK
No of words: 399.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 6.24310776942 5.12529762239 122% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46933824581 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.31971737109 2.80592935109 154% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.446115288221 0.561755894193 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 739.8 506.74238477 146% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 121.573521351 49.4020404114 246% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 155.6875 106.682146367 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9375 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0672713650984 0.244688304435 27% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0273854138322 0.084324248473 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0212321424142 0.0667982634062 32% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0484819252642 0.151304729494 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00764490319975 0.056905535591 13% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.4 13.0946893788 156% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 21.74 50.2224549098 43% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 19.21 12.4159519038 155% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 22.5 9.78957915832 230% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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