As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities. Do you agree or disagree?
Businesses have many advantages and disadvantages. I agree that businesses should be responsible for community in some aspects while they are making money.
It’s obvious that businesses help people to earn money and they will contribute to the general development of country through taxes. After that, the government can use this for schools, hospitals or other development programs. There are also more jobs that be created from businesses and it means there are more chances for everyone to be better with a particular job.
Besides, businesses should put money back to social by charity. This will be so meaningful not also for the community but also for themselves. When they show their goals together with the social responsible, people will love and support them more. Or, they can provide funds with schorlaships for poor people to get an oppoturnity to change their life. In addition, business should be responsible for any affections on environment. They should commit that their work would not harm the environment such as global warming from emissions or their waste water is harmfulless.
In conclusion, I think that while people are doing businesses to make money, they should have social responsibles
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, so, while, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1033.0 1615.20841683 64% => OK
No of words: 195.0 315.596192385 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29743589744 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83356420918 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.620512820513 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 315.0 506.74238477 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.5057255457 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 86.0833333333 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.25 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.58333333333 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219648452588 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0972374414718 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0931174948053 0.0667982634062 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188145414881 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0977872293805 0.056905535591 172% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 78.4519038076 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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