whether people should learn from others or become individual for themselves in order to succeed?
Nowadays, everyone in the society wants to be succeed, people are willing to get to their brilliant way to the success. Thus a reasonable mean is the key to be achievable, which means that we can make full use of our energy in a appropriate way to become success. Therefore an interesting discussion has arisen: whether people should learn from others or become individual for themselves in order to succeed? In my opinion, I insist that it is better to be like others in our life. My points and examples are given below.
Learning from others is convenient and effective. As every elite has a special method to help them become success, and most of the people are expert in imitating from others. So we can take these elites as the examples, communicate more with them and try to copy their special methods in their daily behaviors. Then you might find that the method is really novel to you and you can become interest in the methods. And then you can adjust a little to these tackles which enable them to be suitable to yourself. So you can gradually be proficient in these methods in a relatively short time to help you become success. For instance, when I firstly came into the high school, I was always failed in math. However, one of my classmate, Jack, is very good at math. So I always tried to talk with him and closed to him. When I got these math classes or assignment again, I always analyzed his study methods. Then after one week, I’ve known his methods that I should devote myself to thinking in the math, not just only received what the teacher said into my ears. Since then, I tried to follow this mean and had a break when I felt tired after doing that. Finally, it becomes my own and my math has improved a lot. As a result, the above example can fully prove that learn from Jack to improve my math skills is convenient and effective.
It might become misleading to behave different from everybody else. Make yourself individual can be suitable to your own development indeed and let you become more attractive but it can be easily influenced by your own personality. Everyone have their own criterion and interest in his life. Let’s say, if you are lazy and do not enjoy competing with others or confronting the challenges, you might be less competitive in the society and your behavior is less worthwhile. Therefore, you might get far away from the real success and just stay in your own comfort zone, which might become less efficient. What’s more, it might take more time for you to find a probable way to suit yourself. Because you cannot always make sure that the method is really useful and practical. However, learn from others’ formative habits can help us avoid some twists and turns in our life and they can urge you to work harder all the time, which is more efficient than your personal development.
Admittedly, I am not saying that being different from others is not effective. They can make us become more creative and innovative but also make ourselves feel more comfortable in our life. But it is really a small point compared to the advantage of the imitation from others. Due to the limitation of the space, I am unable to give more information about the topic. But I believe that the examples and explanation above can fully prove the validity of my point of view.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
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Message: Consider replacing "in a appropriate way" with adverb for "appropriate"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...that we can make full use of our energy in a appropriate way to become success. Therefore an interes...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...in a appropriate way to become success. Therefore an interesting discussion has arisen: w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, really, so, then, therefore, thus, while, for instance, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 7.85571142285 267% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 27.0 10.4138276553 259% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 86.0 24.0651302605 357% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 76.0 41.998997996 181% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2752.0 1615.20841683 170% => OK
No of words: 592.0 315.596192385 188% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64864864865 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.93265142912 4.20363070211 117% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53102947145 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 279.0 176.041082164 158% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.471283783784 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 881.1 506.74238477 174% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 32.0 16.0721442886 199% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.9023099073 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.0 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.09375 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 8.67935871743 230% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239098805374 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0676576815566 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.131744341936 0.0667982634062 197% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169906108553 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121625697968 0.056905535591 214% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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