Women are better parents than men. Or women are only as good as men in parenting. How far do you agree to this statement?
For centuries men were responsible for earning a living for the whole family and women were supposed to take good care of their children and home. Thus, creating a mindset that only women are capable of good parenting. I, however, believe that the roles of men and women have changed drastically over the past few decades, now they both are equally involved in the lives of their children.
Women have significant advantages when it comes to parenting. Firstly, it is the mother who bears the child, providing her the essential edge to build a stronger relationship with her little one. Secondly, girls in our society are raised in such a way that they tend to become natural caregiver mainly because of their motherly instinct. Lastly, it can be seen that women are generally polite, compassionate, and affable; as a result, when children face any challenging situation in their life, they tend to share it with their mother instead of the father. Therefore, the traits, such as loving, caring and being polite in a woman supports the viewpoint that they make excellent parents.
However, society has transformed. Now, men and women are equally capable of sharing all the responsibilities whether at home or out in the world. For instance, in big cities, generally both parents are working and they do not have the luxury of time that is why they divide their work. If women in the house oversee the household work, men have to supervise their children's homework and school assignments. Also, fathers can be seen attending the parents-teachers meetings and taking their children to play dates when necessary. Moreover, there are plenty of examples where father single handily raised a child and they grow up to be a beautiful human being. Thus, it can be said that women are no longer the sole flag bearer of good parenting.
To conclude, the assertion that woman makes better parents no longer hold any grounds because of the active participation of fathers in their children’s lives.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-07-24 | anmol.anubha | 78 | view |
- Some people believe the aim of university education is to help graduates get better jobs. Others believe there are much wider benefits of university education for both individuals and society.Discuss both views and give your opinion. 84
- Your friend had made a plan for you to see a movie together but you cannot now not join him. You've found another friend who can go instead of you.Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:Explain why you cannot go anymoreSay who can go instead o 73
- Shopping has become a new favorite pastime for young generation. Why is this the case? Should you encourage them to develop other hobbies too? 89
- The best way to understand other cultures is to work for a multinational organization.To what extent do you agree or disagree? 73
- Some people think that the range of technology currently available is increasing the gap between rich people and poor people. Others think that it is causing the opposite effect.Discuss both views and give your opinion. 84
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for instance, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1669.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99700598802 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71959310717 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562874251497 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 519.3 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7660238513 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.3125 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.875 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.875 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207104260063 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0767942688715 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0724148772161 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128190417811 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0756004302346 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.